What do you think of these characters for a story?

January 20th, 2012

It’s about the characters not my story, so don’t say anything about the story. I have already written the plot, and I’ve thought of everything already. So my characters work with my story.
I just want to know if they are interesting, and worthy of being in a novel.

Jonzi, 25 – Newspaper Reporter.
[Straight brown hair, greenish blue eyes.]
Attire: Dress shirt (no tie) navy blue blazer with white hood, dress pants and shoes.
Power: Strength and can shoot energy spheres from his hands.
Personality: Reserved… but later on in the story becomes more out spoken and a leader.

Amy, 19 – Sophomore in College. (Austin’s older sister.)
[Wavy blonde hair, blue eyes.]
Attire: Sunday dress.
Power: Bullet proof, and can talk telepathically with her little brother Austin.
Personality: Honest and Humble.

Austin, 12 – 6th grader. (Amy’s little brother.)
[Blonde Faux hawk hair, green eyes.]
Attire: Green neon shirt, red wayfarer neon glasses, jeans, and red covers.
Power: Speed and can talk with his sister telepathically in a certain distance.
Personality: Cocky and cool, tries to act like "player".

Scott, 17 – High school Junior.
[Curly dark brown hair, gray eyes/ with a hint of green and blue in them.]
Attire: Red trucker hat, blue wayfarer neon glasses, white Tee-shirt, black skinny tie, red puffy vest, and rubber black and blue high-top sneakers.
Power: None
Personality: Also acts like a "player", but more like a D-bag, and was the basketball team captain.
I posted this before, but I didn’t get an answer about my characters it was mainly about my story.

I like all of the characters already. You have them written out in a simple but very descriptive way here so it’s like we know the characters already icon smile What do you think of these characters for a story? It would depend on the story plot mostly, but I say the characters sound intriguing enough to get my attention.

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2 Responses

  1. נα¢є ωαуℓαи∂ says:

    I like all of the characters already. You have them written out in a simple but very descriptive way here so it’s like we know the characters already :) It would depend on the story plot mostly, but I say the characters sound intriguing enough to get my attention.
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  2. Nerd Nerdington says:

    They seem like good characters, they all have personality and both strengths and flaws. I wouldn’t mind reading something like this. :3
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