It’s about the characters not my story, so don’t say anything about the story. I have already written the plot, and I’ve thought of everything already. So my characters work with my story.
I just want to know if they are interesting, and worthy of being in a novel.
Jonzi, 25 – Newspaper Reporter.
[Straight brown hair, greenish blue eyes.]
Attire: Dress shirt (no tie) navy blue blazer with white hood, dress pants and shoes.
Power: Strength and can shoot energy spheres from his hands.
Personality: Reserved… but later on in the story becomes more out spoken and a leader.
Amy, 19 – Sophomore in College. (Austin’s older sister.)
[Wavy blonde hair, blue eyes.]
Attire: Sunday dress.
Power: Bullet proof, and can talk telepathically with her little brother Austin.
Personality: Honest and Humble.
Austin, 12 – 6th grader. (Amy’s little brother.)
[Blonde Faux hawk hair, green eyes.]
Attire: Green neon shirt, red wayfarer neon glasses, jeans, and red covers.
Power: Speed and can talk with his sister telepathically in a certain distance.
Personality: Cocky and cool, tries to act like "player".
Scott, 17 – High school Junior.
[Curly dark brown hair, gray eyes/ with a hint of green and blue in them.]
Attire: Red trucker hat, blue wayfarer neon glasses, white Tee-shirt, black skinny tie, red puffy vest, and rubber black and blue high-top sneakers.
Personality: Also acts like a "player", but more like a D-bag, and was the basketball team captain.
I posted this before, but I didn’t get an answer about my characters it was mainly about my story.
I like all of the characters already. You have them written out in a simple but very descriptive way here so it’s like we know the characters already It would depend on the story plot mostly, but I say the characters sound intriguing enough to get my attention.